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Your haiku: | mostly people check out videos like crazy and the books gather dust |
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It's the heart's the crazy bus driver
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Your haiku: | mostly people check out videos like crazy and the books gather dust |
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What is your haiku doing in my library?
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watch it okay it’s
friggin degrees and humid as
a design style
I don’t know how I feel about this.
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Okay, this is the second of these I’ve seen that not only fails to be a haiku on the discusses-passage-of-seasons count, but even fails as a senryu be counting 5-8-5 rather than 5-7-5 syllables. You’d think the author could even get that right.
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yes, it’s not even a good fourth-grade-class “haiku” sadly
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that’s a really really awesome haiku.
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ok, maybe it’s not.
but i like the word selection.
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This took me over 20 tries and was the best I got
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zebulon_y
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possible the factthat there’s no zoning perse means that it’s kool
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Created by Grahame
Was yours mostly complete gibberish? Maybe I don’t have a python-generated-pseudo-haiku friendly writing style.
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