Trying to work more on the bits about the people testing strange things in the desert. I like these people and want to get to know them better, but they’re crude right now. Maybe I need them to talk less, but the exposition voice feels too loud also.
The solution of course is just to write more. Clearly the whole crew wants it.
markov
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chaney?
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write more! the whole crew wants it
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substitute:
Please contact me re AOL Trivia.
RichW9090
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