Fixin fiction

Trying to work more on the bits about the people testing strange things in the desert. I like these people and want to get to know them better, but they’re crude right now. Maybe I need them to talk less, but the exposition voice feels too loud also.

The solution of course is just to write more. Clearly the whole crew wants it.

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